Benefitting from peer reviews

The peer review helped me a lot with my consumer paper. Peer review allowed me to see different points of view from my peers rather than just mine. My views from my own work are different than others’ views, which was helpful. My classmates had good constructive criticism. We talked about possible new ideas and potential story lines.  My group, as well as my professor, said comments that I found very helpful. It made me think of new topics while I was listening to them critic my work. It was also helpful listening about others’ papers. I saw what worked and did not work well in their stories and allowed me to think of how I can benefit from their criticism although it was not directed to me. I plan on making my paper more personal and less about consumerism as a subject. I already have new ideas on how to revise my current paper. I plan to change most of the paper and focus on one topic within consumerism, rather than consumerism as a whole spectrum.   I also plan to take more photos to reinforce the point that I am trying to get across through my writing.  I want to make my paper as interesting as possible by mixing the role of advertisements in consumerism as well as anecdotes of how I have been convinced to purchase goods because of advertisements. Advertisements play a key role in the world of consumerism and I want to show how people are subconsciously “brain washed” into consuming items that they do not necessarily need.  I would not have gotten these new ideas if it weren’t for the peer reviewing. I feel that my paper and myself benefitted a lot from it.

         


World of Consumerism

Since the start of the century, people have been consuming more goods than every before. The social media has encouraged people to consume materials in excess of their basic needs. Much money is spent on goods that will most likely end up in the trash within six months of the purchase date. The luxury and greed has turned basic needs to worldwide obsessions. As a consumer, I consider myself an over spender because most of the time I purchase items that I think I need but in reality I do not.

On a daily basis consumers are being brainwashed into purchasing items that they do not need. Greed has driven their minds into not only financial debt, but also into a unsatisfied state of mind. The social media, especially, targets women. Women are insecure about their appearance and are an easy target to convince to consume.  The list of what women by can go on forever, makeup, shoes, clothes, accessories, home goods, etc. I, myself, have been convinced to purchase a lot of the items that I have because of advertisements. It is not easy to ignore them when they are everywhere! They are in magazines, billboards, on television, on the radio, phone applications; it is almost impossible not to see them.

The media uses advertisements and commercials to attract people into their products. They tend to stick with Aristotle’s Appeals of ethos, logos, and pathos.  Major companies pay famous celebrities to endorse their products using ethos. People tend to trust their favorite celebrities and like to, in a sense, “impersonate” them. If Mariah Carey endorses a cosmetic company, her fans are most likely going to buy from that brand just because Mariah Carey uses it. They think that if she uses it then it must be a good product. The media uses this mode of persuasion all the time because it works! People are so easily convinced to consume when a well-known person is endorsing the product.

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Logos is a logical appeal typically marked by facts, figures, and data. This helps consumers rationalize their decisions through hard data that tells them how much money or time they are saving. In most cases, companies use collected data to convince their audience how many people just like them have bought their product. Insurance companies like Geico and Progressive sell their insurance policies by telling their audience how much money they could save with their company. Some of their commercials say how many people have switched from other companies to their company in hopes of increasing their clientele.  Pathos is used to persuade people using emotion. A lot of charity programs use this method to persuade people into donating their money for a cause. St. Jude’s Children’s Hospital often have kids with leukemia or other forms of cancer in their commercials which leads to their audience feeling badly for the poor innocent children having to deal with diseases and eventually donating money to the hospital. Another example of the use of pathos is the American Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Animals, ASPCA. These commercials have depressing background music and show images of abused animals.  Any animal lover will quickly donate money when viewing their commercials. All major companies use one or more of these three appeals to convince consumers to spend their money.

Brand names and design logos attract people to consume. People tend to purchase respected brand names over generic labels. They think the generic version is not as good as the original but most of the time they are just as good and are sold for less money. A pair of Hollister jeans can cost up to seventy dollars when a pair of jeans at American Eagle can cost, at the most, forty dollars. They are both a pair of jeans made from the same material and, most of the time, look similar to each other. The only thing that is different is the brand. Hollister is a higher end brand than American Eagle, which is the reason why their jeans are more expensive. The consumer that is paying seventy dollars for their jeans are not just paying for the jeans, they are paying for the brand name that is stitched into their jeans.

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This is true for almost all products in the world. Stores like Wal-Mart and Target have their own generic versions of the products that they sell. Wal-Mart as Equate products while Target has Up&Up. These generic brands include products like shampoo, facial cleansers, and beauty products and medications. They are a form for consumers to get the same quality as name brand products for less money.

In this unit, we learned to notice how much people consume and reflect upon ourselves on how we consume.  I once considered myself as a moderate consumer and now I wish I were a moderate consumer. I was oblivious of how much I did consume.  Looking at my closet through pictures made me realize how many clothes I had and how much of them I really did not need. Sure I like the luxury of having clothes but in a sense it is useless if I only wear them a couple of times. I can think of at least six shirts that I bought over two months ago and have only worn them once. This unit has not only made me see how I have been over consuming but has also made me think of how I can improve as a consumer and shop wisely. If only everyone reflected upon themselves and how much they consumed, we would be living less consumerist world, where no one cared how much stuff they had or how much they spent to pay for it.


When life’s necessities become an obsession

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In today’s society women are competing with materialism. It is not surprising that women shop a lot, but most of the time they buy unnecessary items. The media advertises name brand clothes and uses celebrities to sell their company. Women always want to wear the newest fashion trends and high end brands. They do not realize that when they buy their favorite brand clothes they are real paying for the name brand. You can find generic versions of apparel for more than half the price. But as the competition of women’s war of who has the best and expensive clothes, so does the materialism obsession. These days, women are not satisfied with having the luxury of having clothes, there are children and many adults in this word that have had the same clothes for years maybe even decades. Poverty has prioritized their needs over their wants. Women’s greed in materialism has increased dramatically over the past centuries. Instead of being happy for want they have, they are upset for what they do not have.

As I took these photographs, I began to feel guilty from seeing how much I actually do have. I do confess that I, at times, complain because I feel like I do not have enough clothes. I have been oblivious of the luxuries that I have. I like to shop a lot online. As I make my purchases little by little, it is hard for me to notice how much I am buying. Looking at my closet through a picture rather than a place to look for what I am going to wear next, has made me see what little space I have for more clothes. The sad part is that these are only my “school” clothes. I still have more at home that I obviously do not wear often. Comparing my closet to my roommate’s closet, seeing how much extra space she has and made me question whether I had too much. I have more shoes, jeans, shirts and coats than her but she only has what she needs and is happy with it. Why can I not be like her? Why do I need these many clothes?

Over winter break, I had difficulty fitting all of my clothes that I brought home from college into my closet and drawers. I noticed I had many clothes stored away that I have not used since my junior year in high school. Frustrated from the lack of space, I decided to go through the clothes in my drawers and give away the clothes that I was not wearing anymore. I still have my closet to go through and my other dresser before I will be done cleaning out my room. I will be limiting my spending habits to purchases that are really necessary.


Youthful Skin

clinique-even_better_makeup_spf_ad_int_eWomen are very insecure about their skin and use makeup to cover up their imperfections. Clique has a makeup line named Even Better. Even Better makeup is intended to treat uneven skin tone over time. The more and longer you use the product the more even colored skin you will get. The eggs in the ad represent skin tone with many marks decreasing over time to a perfectly even skin tone (represented by the spotless egg). During the teenage years is the time period when women get acne, after that time period women have less acne but are left with acne scar marks. The product also features sun protection of an SPF 15 to protect the skin from aging damage caused by the sun’s harmful rays. This product line is targeted towards young women who may have acne scar marks or uneven skin tone.  Clique knows women are insecure about their appearance, especially women with acne, so they lure them into their product with an ad that relates to insecure women. I myself decided to try this product because I had uneven skin tone. I have been using this product for over three years now. I cannot say my skin is flawless because of this product, but it does look a lot healthier when I am not wearing makeup. Although not as severe as before, I still get acne today. I do believe that this product has evened out some of my acne scar marks. I really like this product and will continue to do so.

Photo credit: http://www.lagadget.com/clinique-even-better-makeup-spf15-review


Making Life Easier

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This photo is an advertisement for the Apple iPhone 4S. The phone features a software application that responds to your voice to accomplish many tasks such as: setting a reminder, calling someone, send a text message, navigating, search the web, and the list goes on. Apple is known for having products that are more advanced than their competitors. That’s how Apple has their high clientele; consumers buy their products because they have top-of-the-line technology. Being able to FaceTime with any Apple product is also another perk. It makes it easier to stay connected to your loved ones. Along with the iPhone 4S and other Apple products you can virtually upload your iPhone, iPod touch, or iPad through iTunes, which makes everyone’s lives easier. The iPhone comes with many applications that attract people to buy it because it is a phone that saves time, is easy to use, and you are capable of doing a lot of things with it through your voice. I myself have this phone and love it so much more than my old HTC Thunderbolt android. At first adjusting from an android to the iPhone was difficult, the iPhone seemed too simple for me but I liked it’s technology capabilities. It did not take me long to love my iPhone. When I went home for break, I was messing with my sister’s android, I had forgotten how complicated they are to use. I was thankful for my simple-to-use phone. I believe Apple will always be a step ahead of its competitors, which will attract more consumers. 

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            Pena, Jonathan. iPhone 4S commercial showcases Siri’s talents. 2011. Technology TellWeb. 24 Jan 2013. <http://www.technologytell.com/apple/79342/apple-airs-its-first-iphone-4s-commercial-showcasing-siri-talents/&gt;.

 


Mac vs. PC

When it comes to laptops and desktop computers, Microsoft and Macintosh are clearly the top competitors worldwide. Not only do these big companies spend millions of dollars to advertise their products, but also they periodically offer free products like the Xbox 360 and the iPod touch with the purchase of their products.  These offers lure in the consumers and convince them to purchase them.  People seem to be at war as to which kind of computer is better. I myself currently own a Mac laptop and have owned PCs in the past. Both have worked fine for me, I honesty do not have a preference. Macs tend to be more expensive because they are “better” and “faster” but PCs also have innovative software that can do the same tasks as the Mac computers. Consumers are not paying for the software; they are paying for the brand. The majority of consumers today own Macs than PCs.  This chain is a result of Macs clever way of advertising their products in top movies and shows.  Most of television movies and reality shows currently show the characters using Mac computers. A viewer subconsciously seeing the brand being used by virtually everyone causes them to want to be like the people on television and purchase the brand.  It is a long chain of events of peoples’ obsession with wanting to follow what celebrities are doing and the products that they use.  The argument of which is better between the PC and Mac will go on endlessly. The way that these products are advertised determines the success of the companies.


Are you a spender or a saver?

I would consider myself a moderate consumer. I tend to purchase objects that I like often, but always look for ways to save money. My mom has gotten me into couponing, which is something all college students should do. Whenever I’m out of toiletries I always see if there are coupons available before I buy them.  My guilty pleasure is buying clothes and shoes.  I tend to buy them every time I enter a mall. My roommate says I have a problem but I disagree. Before I buy them I look to see if they’re on sale, if they’re not I tend to wait until they are. Shoes on the other hand are easier for me to buy because I always find a great deal on them online. When I go show shopping I always find the ones I like in store and most of the time find them online for half the price. For my high school prom dance I found a pair of black Steve Madden heels that cost ninety dollars in store. Instead of paying almost a hundred dollars for them, I went home and looked online to see if I could find them for a lesser price. Indeed I did, I bought the exact same pair for twenty dollars online! That’s almost an eighty percent savings.  I will always be looking for ways to spend less money than I have to. Being a college student has given me the harsh reality of being a broke college student. I cannot spend as much as I used to and my parents are not here to convince to buy me things. So far I have changed my spending habits for the better. I always ask myself if I can live without it before I purchase anything and I save a percentage of my money. I will continue to do so throughout my college career and beyond.


Communication Then and Now

To learn how to write is just another facet of human kind’s way of communication. The earliest forms of communication consisted of visual images and symbols utilized to communicate as means of survival. As years progressed, humans have continuously created newer, more efficient ways to express their needs to each other. And we have continued to do so, even today. One of those newer means of efficient expression involved developing upon the words and symbols in order to form an alphabet of which translated into words and eventually conversation. The only difference between word of mouth is the written documentation in which scribes and other educated beings used. Communication of the 21st century has transformed far beyond that. No longer can written words only be seen on paper, but through other forms such as texting, emails, and social networking. Nowadays, it is often more common for words to be written instead of human-to-human speech. Technology has influenced society in irreversible ways. However, one may be surprised to know that people are writing more today than ever before. Newspapers and magazine articles, although less utilized in paper form are still relevant in person and online. Those utilizing the internet express thoughts to themselves and through others through blogs, instant messengers, and other social networking websites such as Facebook, Twitter, and Tumblr to name a few. Technology has also made it possible for people with relatives around the world to communicate not only through email and text messages but also through video chats with software applications such as Skype and FaceTime.  As technology keeps progressing, so will the ways people communicate to each other.